Jacqueline: Since there was no post for November 4th the only post to talk about would be the “Brave New World”. I liked how you talked in sections and made a clear point at the end. I completely agree with the idea of not picking sides but making decisions within both parties. It was a good point to make that some people follow one party too strongly and that has a large effect on the government. You had great word choice and had a strong voice. Awesome job, hope you feel better!
Morgan: In your “ultimate freedom and human morality” blog post you had a great progression within your writing. The beginning was a great attention grabber that led into the cons of a government free world and back into why it could be better to be libertarian and used a personal experience that helped prove your point. I really liked at the end when you summed it up and said that most people probably feel the same. Either end of the spectrum would have a great deal of problems and its good you pointed that out. The second post was well thought out very informative, great job!
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